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yes chrysallis at a lower stage.... blah... yeah its all right wink

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Singapore,

"Get ready to drop in 5...4...3...2...1.." Said a female computerised voice and immediatly, Vernon felt his drop pod detach from the ship with a loud burst of steam. Vernon can feel the G-force acting on him as everything begins to black out. But just as the last sight of light entered his eyes, it reappeared with a shining glow with a loud crash as it landed on a sandy ground. Instinctively from all his past missions, he pushed a button and the hatch of the pod was flung open and he jumped out half expecting enemy fire from around him.

  "This is Vernon from alpha squad. Where the heck are you guys?" Asked Vernon. A few seconds after that, several loud crashed could be heard from a distance. "Touchdown! Ready to rumble. Leme kick some arse." Said Eric, the ever-ready machinegunner. "Alright regroup. This beach appears to be silent. Beware of land mines, I see a couple of it beeping from where I am." Said Vernon, the obvious team leader.

  Alpha squad reached the rendevous within a minute after touchdown. "Something is wrong, we should have been ambushed by now. Alpha team, clear area!" Said Vernon, on his helmet mic. They entered a pretty run downed building with its doors smashed open. Blood was visible everywhere. Scratch marks on walls and floors. The room was filled with stench of dead bodies but they still went in. "Alright guys this is our new stronghold, this will be our main headquaters until command sends us reinforcements." Said Vernon, with a partially whispered tone.

  "Hey Vern, come check this out. Looks like bitches to me, what do you think?" Said Marvic, the sniper. Vernon turned his attention to Marvic and took the sniper from him. He put his eye onto the scope of the sniper. "Wow, they look more horrible than before. CI more and more horrible each day. Taking anyone and making them their test subjects." Said Vernon, with a slight sense of pity. "So they take in anyone and then implant the crysallis which is more powerful than any of ours and then see if it works? And then what do they do if it doesnt works? Just leave em there?" As soon as Marvic finished his sentence, a loud sound of fire came from afar and blood splattering out of the "zombie's" head could be seen. "No. Thats what they do." Said Eric. "Okay, this building has been locked and our status is being tranfered to base." Said Gary, the tech expert.

  "Ah... what do we have here... a blue red coated guy. Hmm a leader, why would they send a leader by himself to check the dead body." Said Marvic. He zoomed out of the sniper scope and saw another sniper looking right at him. "Oh shyt!" And he pulled the trigger ejecting a small but deadly bullet out of the barrel. It went through the Sniper's head and he fell back from his sniper. Blood spilling from everywhere. The leader must have heard the death of his comrade because after that, he ran back in the direction he came from.

  A rocket, fired not far from the building, smashes into the building. "Vic!!!!!Vic!!!! Are you Alright!?" Said someone in the room.

----Summary---
Introduced to a new environment, Singapore.
New team - Alpha team consisting of 4 members, Vernon, team leader. Marvic, Sniper. Gary, tech expert. Eric, machinegunner.
New fortess made. What heppeneds next....?

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I thought itll be good if we kept a habit of summarising what we wrote so that in case we need to refer, for example characters, we can just look at the summary instead of reading the whole bunch of words in our posts.

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Stevinlewis wrote:

I thought itll be good if we kept a habit of summarising what we wrote so that in case we need to refer, for example characters, we can just look at the summary instead of reading the whole bunch of words in our posts.


I do agree, and i also think we need a general plot summer somewhere, cause this one has me kinda lost... too much stuff happenin at once, which is why i havent been posting much, i dont know whats going on >_>

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Lol whups....

You got it up through the end of Salvation right?  Summary of Punishment so far, IMO:  The atmosphere is degrading.  The air is toxic to any natural human lungs exposed to it for very long, so most survivors are either chrysalis symbiotes--in early stages since this is only a couple of years after Salvation--or wanderers with air-filtration mechanisms.  Most of the chrysalis symbiotes were "done" by Conglomerate International, which I consider to be the all-powerful entity which originally controlled BGI as well as countless other branches undoubtedly and now basically controls the world.  The people who get chrysalises implanted by CI also have to agree to have a "chip" implanted.  The function of this chip is undisclosed, though I imagine it to be some sort of a potential control/killswitch device.

Mai and her father started up their own organization trying to form resistance against CI and providing people with catch-free chrysalises for survival.  Barabas and the former imago test subjects associate with Mai, but often act outside the organization of their own accord doing more hostile and directly violent work.  Griffin and Casey hadn't seen any of them in almost three years.  Now they are all reunited.

Mai and Mukade at some point made love and created a daodan child who seems to have incredibly accelerated physical maturity and probably considerable mental maturity as well.  This child, Akemi, is not even three years old but appears as a preteen or early teenage girl.

Mai, Barabas, Griffin and James all went to India following what I expected to be an arbitrary lead, but have returned with a guest.  They returned to find their carefully-concealed HQ breached and raided, and Mai's daughter missing.

Also back in India they've developed a way to make a functioning liquid form chrysalis for implantation, assumedly intravenously or possibly through ingestion.

Anything else you're unclear on?  I really just gave what I felt were the basics there, and I probably didn't remember everything.

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Yep thats pretty much it. Dam everytime i hear or see someone saying a guy and a girl making love my heart gets thumping really heart =.= I think ive got heart problems *left for the doctor*

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Stevinlewis wrote:

Yep thats pretty much it. Dam everytime i hear or see someone saying a guy and a girl making love my heart gets thumping really heart =.= I think ive got heart problems *left for the doctor*

Err.... okay??

Steven - i think those are called horomones, or so im told wink


Anyways, im just confused as to where Stevin was going with Singapore, it just seems that we already have enough going on, but if your gonna take it somewhere, it works. Also, we need some more more that new villain introduced?

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To Mukade: Nope no more new environment. Was thinking maybe we should make them meet and save it for the final fight big_smile? But still we need to stick onto the title "punishment"

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Man, if I had such a fantastic imagination.. my grades in language would diffinitely go up.

The final lesson of history 'Let's never go back there again'.

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Haha.  smile  Damn, I thought you were gonna be writin' the next part.

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I feel like this story is dieing O_O. Cmon guys just let ur mind and ur fingers flow. wink

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Oh hell I never noticed that Singapore post until just now.  I hate to just ignore your work, Stevin, but I don't think anyone is gonna write for them since we don't really know who they are or what's going on with them and we have other stuff goin' on back with Mai and her people.  Maybe, like you said, they can become a part of the story later on.

That being said, the last part that was written about the present action with Mai was by me.  So anyone else want a crack at that?

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Yeah back to Mai!! :S

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